<p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block">文圖 /云跡</p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">人都會(huì)做夢(mèng)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">夢(mèng)里的世界</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">像萬(wàn)花筒</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">只是啊只是</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">千萬(wàn)別淪陷</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">及時(shí)醒來(lái)，大千世界</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">還有更精彩的夢(mèng)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">只是帶著淚與血</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"> ——題記</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">【夢(mèng)】</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">輕輕的將額角的皺褶摘下</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">鏡子里朦朧著玫瑰 </p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">把皺褶包好，小心壓在枕下</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">悄悄的走進(jìn)了夢(mèng)鄉(xiāng)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">約會(huì)久違的面龐</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">背起褪色行囊，獨(dú)自在路上</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">野徑云深，明月橫山</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">那個(gè)路口，是誰(shuí)在顧盼</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">朦朧中沒(méi)有了方向 </p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一聲悠長(zhǎng)的簫音</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">驚醒了南去的歸雁</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">世界怎會(huì)如此空曠</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">只有風(fēng)飄蕩</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">行囊里拽出信箋</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">滴一滴血填充心的守望</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">再涂一片霜鬢，于那額上</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我展開自己</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">溫暖那冰涼的鋼筋水泥</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">讓他們重疊成家的溫馨</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我變?yōu)橐恢陿?，穿行于其?lt;/p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一身蔥綠，開紫色的花</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">結(jié)香甜的果……</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">【醒】</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一夢(mèng)醒來(lái)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">夜空無(wú)語(yǔ)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">傾聽(tīng)你的足音</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">跌落在我的詩(shī)里</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">漫天星輝</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">揉碎一空朦朧</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:18px;">仰望蒼天</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">月隱雨斜</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">忘憂湖里支靠</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">溫潤(rùn)我無(wú)邊的清冷</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">闊成海的期盼</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">瘦成一縷清風(fēng)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">于是</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">用血凝一朵蓮</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">靜靜地綻開</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">直到</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">在紅塵凋零</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">用曠世的微笑</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">相依于時(shí)光的呼吸間</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">醉知酒濃</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">醒知夢(mèng)空</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">原來(lái)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">醒醒醉醉依舊痛</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">誰(shuí)的空杯</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">誰(shuí)的酒濃</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">誰(shuí)在墓碑下</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">葬下諾言</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">誰(shuí)在紅塵路上</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">畫下癡情冢</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">夜深燈千帳</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">孤影夢(mèng)不成</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">南雁別秋遠(yuǎn)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">秋葉已泛黃</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">獨(dú)留</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">殘夢(mèng)空無(wú)聲</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">【夢(mèng)醒間】</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">誰(shuí)把夢(mèng)兒灌醉</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">偷走了我的玫瑰</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">只留下一絲芬芳</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">又隨月兒西墜</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">夢(mèng)醒的枕邊</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">是誰(shuí)擺滿了花蕾</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">花香似酒又把夢(mèng)灌醉</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">所有的晝與夜</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">醒來(lái)又睡去</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">花開寂寞花落心碎</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">夢(mèng)里赤橙藍(lán)紫</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">醒來(lái)黑白翠微</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">醒夢(mèng)顛亂夜明晝黯</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">彎彎的月牙獨(dú)自沉</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">醉眼聽(tīng)風(fēng)吹</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">醉夢(mèng)間</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">你說(shuō) 來(lái)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我說(shuō) 在</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我從未離開</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">【夢(mèng)后】</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">夜色</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">黑得如絲綢</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">幾片浮云</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">將星星擦得如銀器</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一朵玫瑰飛過(guò)天空</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一束零碎的幻像</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">雨水一般墜下</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">夢(mèng)瞪著徹悟的眼睛</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">將縫補(bǔ)過(guò)的翅膀</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">掛在樹梢</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">誰(shuí)用一管洞簫</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">吹醒了燭火</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">光影漾開時(shí)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">有飛蛾</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">撲火起舞</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">【問(wèn)夢(mèng)】</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">夜色恍惚</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">衾涼寂冷</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">雨初歇 念驟起</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">馳騁錯(cuò)落</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">千帆數(shù)盡江水索</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">軟語(yǔ)憑問(wèn)誰(shuí)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">再倚桿 月瘦影稀</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">兮兮流光笑我多情</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">孑孓一懷碎語(yǔ)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">似夢(mèng)囈語(yǔ)又非</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">夢(mèng)里 一簾漏滴</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">淚濕 鮫帕透</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">清玄若虛 情難問(wèn)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">須臾間 只怕夢(mèng)醒</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">朦朧處 卻念空緲</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我問(wèn)夢(mèng)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">【愿夢(mèng)不要醒來(lái)】</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">當(dāng)夜的鼾聲響起</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">月光站在花格窗上</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">夢(mèng)逃出被窩</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">悄悄地鉆進(jìn)未眠的花蕊</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一窗月光 半墻虛影</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">爐上輕煙 夜色傾斜</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">有人睡在光影里</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">夢(mèng)在一座城堡中囈語(yǔ)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">攬鏡低眉 ，流水桃花</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">鏡中光影水中的月亮</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">風(fēng)只一拂 便碎成白銀</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">有魚擺尾潛下 去追逐</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">寫滿故事的碎片</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">夜的花園 光影如幻</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">天水之間 有琴聲淌出</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一只麋鹿靜待溪水邊</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">等待夢(mèng)游女提著沙裙前來(lái)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">將夜的光影</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">織成黎明的魚肚白</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">格窗花影 滿簾風(fēng) 半壁故事</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">星光照水面 花影在墻上</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">月色在屋頂</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">風(fēng)馱來(lái)云朵 ，寂靜如水紋</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">夜蟲張開翅膀 輕微飛翔</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">此時(shí) 萬(wàn)物寂靜 溫暖相愛(ài)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">幽光蝶停歇在夜游女眉睫</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">夜色多情 光影纏綿</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">愿夢(mèng)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">不要醒來(lái)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">誠(chéng)謝應(yīng)旺安老師雅賞點(diǎn)評(píng)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">《夢(mèng)（組章）》以“夢(mèng)-醒-夢(mèng)醒間-夢(mèng)后-問(wèn)夢(mèng)-愿夢(mèng)不醒”為脈絡(luò)，構(gòu)建了一場(chǎng)細(xì)膩綿長(zhǎng)的心靈獨(dú)白。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">詩(shī)人善用意象編織夢(mèng)境：玫瑰、簫音、歸雁勾勒朦朧悵惘，鋼筋水泥中綻放的果樹，藏著對(duì)“家的溫馨”的熾熱渴望。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">組詩(shī)的張力藏于“醒與夢(mèng)”的拉扯：夢(mèng)里是“約會(huì)久違面龐”的甜蜜，醒后是“殘夢(mèng)空無(wú)聲”的孤寂；“用血凝蓮”的深情與“葬下諾言”的痛惜交織，將夢(mèng)境的虛幻與現(xiàn)實(shí)的沉重寫得淋漓盡致。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">結(jié)尾“愿夢(mèng)不要醒來(lái)”的祈愿，既是對(duì)夢(mèng)中溫暖的眷戀，更是對(duì)紅塵紛擾的淡然超脫，于往復(fù)的醒夢(mèng)間，道盡世人共有的情愫與悵然。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">誠(chéng)謝陽(yáng)光老師雅賞點(diǎn)評(píng)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">這組《夢(mèng) (組章)》以“夢(mèng)”為核心意象，串聯(lián)起“入夢(mèng)—夢(mèng)醒—夢(mèng)醒之間—夢(mèng)后—問(wèn)夢(mèng)—愿夢(mèng)不醒”的情感脈絡(luò)，如一場(chǎng)關(guān)于虛幻與真實(shí)的精神漫游，字間凝著悵惘、執(zhí)著與對(duì)溫情的隱秘渴求，讀來(lái)如觀心湖波瀾，層層漾開，余味綿長(zhǎng)。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">整組文字以“夢(mèng)”為鏡，照見(jiàn)人心深處的渴望與悵惘。從對(duì)夢(mèng)的沉溺到夢(mèng)醒的痛徹，從醒夢(mèng)之間的恍惚到夢(mèng)后的澄澈，再到對(duì)夢(mèng)的叩問(wèn)與眷戀，情感層層遞進(jìn)，如一曲關(guān)于愛(ài)與失落、虛幻與真實(shí)的變奏。意象如“玫瑰”“簫音”“蓮”“燭火”“月光”等貫穿，虛實(shí)交織，既寫盡夢(mèng)的縹緲，更道盡人情的真切，讀來(lái)令人心有戚戚，余韻悠長(zhǎng)。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block 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