<p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">【秋念】</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我追不上你的腳步</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">慢一些，別棄我而去</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">當(dāng)你成為風(fēng)景</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">而我依然如初翹首</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">穿越秋水</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我是一只翩飛的蝶</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">立在歲月的枝頭</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:18px;">我看見(jiàn)秋天漸漸變瘦</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:18px;">天邊的牧歌低挽</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:18px;">鴻雁的歸羽遙在天邊</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">潮濕我眼睛的</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">不是三千里云水</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">是那忘記了歲月的年輪</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我將一顆種子播種在秋天</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">可是啊</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">有哪一道風(fēng)景比得上</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">馬頭琴聲里歸來(lái)的大雁</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">【秋葉】</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">枯黃擦不去眼角的淚水</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">它以落葉的方式訴說(shuō)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一個(gè)夜的傳說(shuō)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">風(fēng)吹過(guò)夜空</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">突然聽(tīng)到神的聲音</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">如果有愛(ài)?</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">請(qǐng)記得繞過(guò)落葉</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">【眼神】</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">小心地收攏月光</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">讓月的清澈漾為歌唱</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">在路上，在輪回里</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">眼與眼對(duì)望的也不是皺紋</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"> <span style="font-size:18px;">手與手相握的不是時(shí)間</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">【秋囈】</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">沐浴秋色的韻腳</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">沿一首詩(shī)把平仄打開(kāi)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">任赤橙黃綠繚亂</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">如罌粟花盛開(kāi)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我用黑白青藍(lán)回想</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">紫色在何方</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">靠近一個(gè)設(shè)問(wèn)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">在黑色的土地上</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">收割夢(mèng)中的花草</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">憶起那年秋天</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">拾起瓣瓣菊香，酒中浸泡</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">手扶東籬 望北國(guó)雪</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">玉蘭開(kāi)后 菊花在異鄉(xiāng)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">將滿坡秋色染成春天的模樣</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一滴淚迎風(fēng)，濡濕秋的眼瞼</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">點(diǎn)亮燈光，黎明帶著夜走遠(yuǎn)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">夢(mèng)中的溫馨和囈語(yǔ)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">在昨日的體溫中鋪開(kāi)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">若干年后 醉成溫馨的記憶</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">讓一朵流云去探詢</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">大雁在哪里</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">【秋緒】</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">子夜的墻頭</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我在黑暗中與你對(duì)坐</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">禪寂的世界里</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一朵隔世之花煜煜生輝</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">如果沿著此生的光陰行走</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">來(lái)世 我與你</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">是否還會(huì)在銀河的橋上相會(huì)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">當(dāng)時(shí)光流逝</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我用星星點(diǎn)亮黎明之光</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">折下春天的模樣</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">收集四季所有的陰晴</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">在天神的祭壇</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">細(xì)數(shù)朵朵流星掉落的灰燼</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">窗外 清風(fēng)吹拂</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">枝頭上的葉子</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一葉比一葉生動(dòng)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">當(dāng)晨曦的露水被鳥(niǎo)兒叼走</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我要送你一座虛構(gòu)的花園</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">聆聽(tīng)花朵盛開(kāi)的聲音</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">誠(chéng)謝野狼老師雅賞點(diǎn)評(píng)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">云跡小號(hào)老師的《秋意闌珊（斷章）》以“念、葉、眼神、囈、緒”五章鋪展秋韻，將秋之景與心之情深度交融。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">詩(shī)中意象典雅又鮮活，鴻雁歸羽、東籬菊香、銀河鵲橋勾連古今，“秋天漸漸變瘦”“虛構(gòu)的花園”等表達(dá)獨(dú)具巧思。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">語(yǔ)言清麗含韻，平仄暗藏其間，色彩詞的鋪陳讓秋景可感，思念、悵惘與期許層層遞進(jìn)。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">既見(jiàn)古典詩(shī)詞的雅致底蘊(yùn)，又含現(xiàn)代詩(shī)的靈動(dòng)自由，于虛實(shí)之間勾勒秋的肌理與人心的柔軟，讀來(lái)如沐清輝，余韻縈繞不散。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> 秋意闌珊