<p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我想找一個能說話的人</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">能聽懂我說話的人</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">能聽我說廢話的人</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">喜歡我的廢話的人</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">——題記</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">深夜三點(diǎn) 我的句子在流浪</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">你的耳道總亮著免簽的綠燈</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">那些被語法驅(qū)逐的殘章</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">在你鼓膜上注冊了永久戶籍</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">因此，我擁有廢話永居權(quán)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">《絮語法則》</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"> </p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">他們說：言語必須</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">鍛成利箭，或</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">沉甸甸的金幣</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">而我囤積的是</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">唇齒漏下的秕谷</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">喉間飄散的柳絮</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">以及那些被修辭篩棄的稗子</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">你卻說：</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">“傾倒吧。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">不用箭矢的耳朵狩獵</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">不為金幣的聲響屈膝</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我有一片</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">鐵漿熔鑄的聆聽</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">任你銹蝕的紐扣</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">喋喋滾落</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">任你結(jié)巴的星子</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">噼啪墜落</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">任你詞語的灰燼</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">堆成無意義的雪</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我站著，站成</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一座不校驗(yàn)重量的</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">火爐</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">只為證明</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">最燙的光</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">正來自</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">那些未被命名的燃燒”</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"> </p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">此刻我終于確信：</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">所有稱之為“廢”的</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">都是心門，銅綠的鎖芯</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">而我們正是彼此</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">用體溫磨亮的</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">鑰匙</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">當(dāng)你俯首</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">拾起我跌落省略號</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">整個宇宙的寂靜</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">突然</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">共振</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"> </p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">《有耳》</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"> </p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我有許多掉落的廢話</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">熱的石子涼的灰，半融的糖</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">在齒關(guān)猶豫的羽毛</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">你有耳</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">你讓耳</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">成為低處的天空</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">收藏飄蕩的字符</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">迷路的嘆號</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">被語法流放的逗點(diǎn)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">收</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">就只是收著</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">不問“這云為何皺巴巴？”</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">不說“那風(fēng)應(yīng)該往哪吹。”</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我的廢話堆成小山時</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">你抽一根草莖量了量</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">說：“正好</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">夠造一個</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">蜂鳥的巢。”</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"> </p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">而我終于聽見</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">那些墜落的聲音</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">在你耳中的回聲</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">原來都是</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">堆積已久的</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">鐘聲</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">《心耳》</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"> </p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">當(dāng)世界的聽力衰退</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">有人偏收藏</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一片廢話連篇</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">墜落的云</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">不需要鍍金的回響</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">不必押韻的浮橋</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我的標(biāo)點(diǎn)脫軌時</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">你總有溫?zé)岬陌馐?lt;/p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">校正生活撞擊的凹痕</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"> </p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">最奢侈的許可證是</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">準(zhǔn)我卸下所有喻體</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">赤裸地橫陳</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">任齒間跌撞落花飛絮</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">而你用目光</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">鑄成永不散光的</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">虹膜</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"> </p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">當(dāng)所有靜音鍵開始躁亂</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我們掏出口袋就所有毛票</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">購買心跳的公有權(quán)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">在語法廢墟之上</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">立起一道刻著：</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">此處通行廢話</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">直達(dá)永恒的界碑</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"> </p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">當(dāng)世界開始征收沉默稅</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我們依然把廢話剪成窗花</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">在彼此耳朵里貼滿便簽</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">連標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">都活得理直氣壯</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">《誰能說廢話不快樂》</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"> </p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">鑰匙卡在鎖孔轉(zhuǎn)不開的清晨</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">你撿起我掉落的嘆息</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">說咖啡漬像未完成的星圖</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">把碎成雪的嘆息折成紙飛機(jī)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">別人收割我口袋里的金句</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">只有你彎腰拾起沉默的標(biāo)點(diǎn)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">當(dāng)我說云朵是天空的蛀牙</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">你已端出玻璃杯給我漱口水</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">其實(shí)每句廢話都像求救的硬幣</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">投進(jìn)你耳蝸里的電話亭</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">你說臺風(fēng)是冰箱在打噴嚏</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">暴雨就如天女散花</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"> </p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我們囤積的廢話越瑣碎</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">越能填滿現(xiàn)實(shí)鋒利的縫隙</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">像兩件起球的舊毛衣</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">用毛線頭互縫破洞的冬季</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我說“路上踩到螞蟻”</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">被你翻譯成銀河遷徙的軌跡</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">原來廢話是最心悅的詼諧</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">當(dāng)世界啞然，我們?nèi)栽诨匾?lt;/p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">開心得無與倫比</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">《其實(shí)我只想和你說廢話》</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">那些被生活剪掉的邊角料</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">像鑰匙總插不進(jìn)鎖孔的清晨</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">別人只關(guān)心我飛得高不高</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">你卻問我翅膀有沒沾上露水</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">當(dāng)所有人忙著收割金句</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">你替我收藏摔碎的標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">說廢話是因?yàn)殍€匙在你手里</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">能打開我所有生銹的比喻</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">當(dāng)我說"云朵像蔫掉的棉花糖"</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">你已備好桂花香的充電寶</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"> </p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我們往對話里塞滿泡沫紙</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">防止快遞時撞傷真心</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">那些被現(xiàn)實(shí)退回的信件</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">在你耳蝸里蓋上了永居郵戳</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">原來，廢話是信任的零錢</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">在自動付款投幣時</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">能換到兩罐冒著氣泡的月光</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">和整夜不用擰緊發(fā)條的時間</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">那一刻，我們開心得就像</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我的圖片</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">《兩個人的舞蹈》</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">謝謝梧桐老師雅賞點(diǎn)評</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">這首詩以“廢話”為獨(dú)特載體，串聯(lián)起人與人之間深層的理解與信任。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">先以“句子流浪”“耳道亮綠燈”等鮮活意象，打破言語需“成利箭、為金幣”的固有認(rèn)知；再借“鐵漿熔鑄的聆聽”“不校驗(yàn)重量的火爐”等比喻，凸顯“傾聽”的純粹與包容。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">文末將“廢話”升華為“信任的零錢”“心門的鑰匙”，于細(xì)碎字句中藏真摯情感。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">既寫出非常規(guī)表達(dá)的價值，更道盡靈魂契合的溫暖——無需修飾的傾訴與無條件的接納，正是最動人的情感共鳴。為佳作點(diǎn)贊。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> 謝謝聽我廢話